Vegetable Cake
by
Rachel Cooke
(age 14)
by
Rachel Cooke
(age 14)
Dawn dropped
a dense slice of moist chocolate cake on a plate, silently
praying that her little Beckett would eat it up. At his latest checkup the
doctor said that he was lacking in vitamins found in fruits and vegetable, and
she knew why. He hated them and absolutely refused to eat even the smallest
crumb of anything nutritious.
Earlier
this afternoon, while
she was scrolling through her Instagram feed, she had
spotted a chocolate cake recipe someone had made using avocado and beets that claimed to not
alter the chocolatey,
delicious taste of the cake.
Dawn immediately clicked the link for the recipe and got to baking. Hopefully, Beckett would like this and finally get some nutrition and vitamins after such an extensive period of time without them.
Dawn immediately clicked the link for the recipe and got to baking. Hopefully, Beckett would like this and finally get some nutrition and vitamins after such an extensive period of time without them.
"Come
here Beckett!" she called loudly, her voice ringing into the playroom
where Beckett was sitting on the floor building a lego sculpture. The joyful two year
old quickly hopped up and ran to where his mom had set the cake on the table, a
fork and napkin lying expectantly
beside it.
Dawn held
her breath, tense all over, as he scooped up a piece and put it
into his mouth. She awaited his sure-to-be-awful critique
as he chomped away.
"Yummy!" he cried as
he put another piece in between his teeth.
Dawn released
her breath and sighed a giant sigh of relief. I guess I'll just have to be
more creative with my cooking. Dawn was already
planning the next recipe.
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1 comment:
Good story, Rachel! Sometimes it does take
creative means to get kids to eat vegetables.
Keep writing!
Sunny
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