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Saturday, December 10, 2016

"The Last Spring Show"




"The Last Spring Show"
by
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)


There once was a dancer by the name of Hazel. She did all kinds of dancing; ballet, different styles of jazz, tap, hip-hop, but her most favorite was contemporary.
Her dance teacher saw great potential in her student and worked hard to help improve the skills Hazel had learned over the years.
Now in her senior year of high school, she has earned a solo for the spring show.
……….
“Hazel! Wait up!”
I turned to see my best friend, Vanessa, making her way through the crowded halls of Waverly High School in Waverly, Illinois
I stopped and waited for her to catch up. “Hey girl! What’s up?”
“Can you drive me to dance after school?”
“Sure. I’m also giving a ride to Jiana. Her parents are out of town and have both of their cars.” Jiana was new to the studio this year. Her dad worked for some sort of insurance company, and he got transferred from Pennsylvania to Illinois this past summer. She had been dancing since she was four, and for her first three years of high school, she was at CPYB (Central Pennsylvania Youth Ballet). So she was way ahead of most of us in ballet.
“Great! Thanks, I wish I could just pass my driving test! I’ve taken it three times in the past six months, and I still can’t get it.”
“You’ll get it eventually. Just keep trying. When’s the next test scheduled?”
“Next Saturday. And I’m nervous already!”
All of a sudden the bell rang for lunch, so we made our way to the cafeteria. I spotted Jiana at one of the back tables and waved. She beckoned Vanessa and me over to the table, so we worked our way through the crowded cafeteria.
“Hey guys! Want to sit with me?”
“Sure.” We sat down and pulled our lunches out of our bags. We’ve packed our own lunches since grade school, because you never know how bad the lunches they make at school are going to be.
After taking a couple of bites of cold pizza, I started a conversation. “I can’t wait till dance this afternoon! Spring show is only a month away, can you believe it?”
My friends shook their heads and Vanessa spoke up. “I’m so nervous about learning my solo tomorrow!”
Jiana nodded. “Isn’t it awesome that we all got solos? I didn’t think I would because I’m new to the studio, but I guess Miss Bailey thought I had some talent, I’m not trying to brag or anything, I was just surprised.”
I almost gagged, “Some talent?? Girl, you have more than some talent, you danced at CPYB for three years! Of course Miss Bailey would want you to have a solo, especially a pointe solo! Right Vanessa?”
She nodded her head enthusiastically. “Yeah, you’re the first pointe soloist since 2001! Not many people want pointe as their ‘minute to shine!’ I hope Miss Bailey doesn’t choreograph too hard a routine for me. I know tap is her specialty, but she always tends to go a little crazy with it!”
We laughed. A little crazy was a BIG understatement! At that moment the bell rang again signaling the end of lunch, so we hurried off to our different classes.

*****
“Good job guys! That was wonderful! This routine is going to be a showstopper!” We laughed. “Showstopper” was the name of the song for the group number.
It was Saturday. The day devoted for the seniors. There were eight of us. Four got solos, and the other four were paired for duets. We also had the group number. The style of the group dance changes every year. This year it was hip-hop. I felt kind of bad for Jiana because her main focus is ballet, and hip-hop is like the polar opposite of ballet. But she was actually catching on pretty good. We’d had hip-hop combos a couple times during the year, but never a full routine.
“All right people, senior practice next Sunday afternoon at one. Make sure you’ll be here. Jiana you’re first for solos. Go get your pointe shoes on. Hazel, you have a two hour break. Do whatever you need to do, but make sure you are warmed up before we start. Vanessa and Kaylee, you can leave or stay. Do you know when your times are?”
They nodded.
“Good! Duets? I’ll see you tomorrow afternoon. At two and four. Yes?”
“Yes Ma’am!” They said in unison.
She smiled. “Wonderful! All right, you are dismissed.”
We went out of the studio into the waiting room where our stuff was. Jiana, who left when Miss Bailey told her to get her shoes on, was warming up a little while she waited for everyone to get out of the studio.
“Good luck, Jiana!” I hugged her. “You’ll do great!”
She gave me a weak smile. “Thanks.” And then she entered the studio to begin her lesson.

*****
“Man, I’ve got to hand it to Miss Bailey. She sure knows how to drive hard and be patient at the same time!” Jiana had just finished her two hour slot and was taking off her pointe shoes.
“Yeah, she’s pretty good at that! By the way, Jiana, you did awesome! And the song, I had never thought of “Guilty” being a pointe song, but Miss Bailey made every movement to match the music!” I loved watching Jiana dance she has a knack for pulling you into the routine and make you feel like you’re the one dancing. “I wish I could dance on pointe like you can!”
“Hey, I’m no genius in hip-hop!” She laughed.
Miss Bailey poked her head out the studio door. “Hazel? I’m ready when you are.”
“Coming, Miss Bailey!” I headed toward the studio door.
“Good luck, Hazel!” Jiana and Vanessa called in unison.
I laughed and walked into the studio.
“You ready for this Hazel?”
“I was born ready!”
“That’s the spirit, all right, are you all warmed up?”
I nodded.
“Good, then let’s get to it. So you’re going to start up-stage on stage left, facing the back with your right leg ready.”
I walked to the corner and placed my right leg behind me and waited for Miss Bailey’s instructions.
“Hold the first seven counts, then turn to your right shoulder and plie (plee-eh) on eight, three chaines (che-nays) one, two, three, four. After the last one plie onto your right leg and do two second arabesque sautés (so-tays) right, left five, six, seven, eight. Then tuck your right leg and roll to your left hip. That’s one, two, three, four, sit up on your knees and cambre (com-bray) back five six seven eight. Good, do you want to try it with music or go on?”
“Try it with music.”
“OK, let’s do it.” Miss Bailey walked over to the stereo and put my music in. When she pressed play the first notes of Britt Nicole’s “Feel the Light” flooded the room and I began to dance.

*****

“Hazel, you made me cry!” Vanessa and Jiana were waiting outside the studio door as I walked out after my class. “Although, I’m not sure if it was you, the song, or Miss Bailey balling her eyes out. Or all three!”
“Yeah, me too!” Jiana chimed in, “I’ve always loved that song. But when someone, namely you, is dancing to it, it makes the words seem to come from the dance. Does that make any sense at all?”
Vanessa and I both nodded our heads, and I spoke up, “It makes complete and total sense!”
Kaylee, the fourth soloist, came in just then. “Did I miss Hazel’s solo?”
“Yeah, I just finished.”
“Darn. I love watching you dance. Oh well, I’ll see it soon enough.” She put her dance bag down and turned to Jiana. “How’d you do?”
“I think I did OK, but there’s so much information, my brain is swimming right now!”
We laughed.
“What’s so funny out here?” Miss Bailey said with mock sternness.
“Jiana just said her brain is ‘swimming’ with all the dance info she’s learned today!”
“Well that’s the whole point!” She had a twinkle in her eye. “All right Vanessa, you’re up.”
Vanessa stood up straight, clicked her heels together and saluted. “Yes Ma’am!”
She laughed. “Good practice for your routine. There’s a lot of that in it!”
As they headed into the studio, Miss Bailey turned around. “Jiana? If you’re available Monday evening, Amanda and I could use some help with the intermediate ballet class.”
“Sure, I’d be happy to help.” She acted casual, but I noticed a spark in her eyes that lit up her whole face.
“Wonderful! I’ll see you at five-o-clock on Monday.” Then she turned and walked into the studio where Vanessa was waiting.
“Did that really just happen?” Jiana asked.
“What? Miss Bailey asking you to help with the ballet class?” She nodded. “Then yes, it did just happen. Are you surprised?”
“Yes, and I’m already nervous!”
“Jiana, you’ll be fine!”
“But I’ve never assisted a class before, except the five-year-olds, but they’re easy. Intermediate ballet is a lot of Jr. High and High School aged kids!”
“OK, Ballet Assistant 101: Think of it more as a free class that’s a little below your level. You’re most likely just going to be demonstrating. That’s what I do in the basic class. If she asks you to do barre warm up, then think back to what you knew at an intermediate level. Amanda will also be there. She’s been the assistant all year, and she’ll help you. Also, don’t be afraid to ask Miss Bailey questions! As we all know, she LOVES to talk!”
“Thanks, Hazel, I guess I should stop freaking out at every little new thing that happens, or I won’t get anywhere in life!”
I smiled, “That’s what friends are for. Let’s watch Vanessa now.” We walked over to the observation window and watched our best friend learn her solo.

*****


The spring show was a huge success, we performed at three different theatres and had A LOT of fun. After the last performance Miss Bailey hosted a party for the seniors and we cried and laughed and cried some more, and at the end of the evening we all went our separate ways with a gift from the studio. Our senior group routine photo and a five by seven group picture of the seniors in our special costumes. But the best gift was from Miss Bailey, a promise that no matter what, even if we never take another dance class in our lives, we will always be loved and welcomed by our loving and devoted teacher, Miss Bailey Taylor. 


(Lesson 16 - Endings)


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Friday, September 2, 2016

Burst of Flavor


Burst of Flavor
by 
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)

Lilian’s face twisted into a concentrated look as she roasted the Starburst at the end of her stick. She slowly turned it until it was drippy then set it on a plate. She couldn’t wait to try it, her friend had given her instructions on how to roast it and assured Lilian that she would love it.

After a few minutes she poked it. Then slowly she picked it up, placed it in her mouth and bit down. She closed her eyes and sighed as the hardened Starburst gave way to a gooey, fruity, candy.


She savored it as long as she could, and the whole time she had an enormous grin on her face! Then once she had swallowed the last bit, she reached for another Starburst to roast.


(Assignment for Lesson #15 - Show vs. Tell)



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Thursday, June 30, 2016

First, Second, and Third Pirouettes On Pointe





First, Second, and Third Pirouettes On Pointe
by
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)

Earlier this year I got my first pair of pointe shoes, a type of ballet shoe specially made for a dancer to balance on the tips of your first three toes. I was a student at Laurie’s School of Dance in Winslow, Maine. I practiced at least three times a week, and on Saturdays, I had a thirty-minute class along with thirteen other girls.

Then during Summer Intensive 2016, (June 23, 24) after three days of hard work in tap, jazz, contemporary/ballet, and especially pointe, we were working on pirouette preps, an exercise where you slide out with your right foot, bring your left foot in behind, take a little step with your right and step in front with your left into plie (bent legs). Then you slide your left foot in so you’re on the box (the top of your pointe shoe), and bring your right leg to passé (the toe of your right foot is right at your knee). A pirouette is a turn on one leg.

 After we did that almost all the way across the floor, Miss Laurie, my dance teacher, suddenly told me to turn. I calmly nodded and attempted the turn. I didn’t quite get up to full pointe, so I fell out of it. When we were finished with the exercise, Miss Laurie said when she told me to turn, my face suddenly went from focused to terrified. It was pretty scary.

 The next day, Friday, I tried again. I got up to full pointe but still fell out of it. Then at the demonstration that night, when I was doing my third pirouette on pointe in front of my parents and the parents of fifteen other girls, I got up on full pointe and landed gracefully.


It was one of the best moments of my life!




(Assignment for Lesson #14 - Memories)


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Tuesday, May 17, 2016

Tiger in the Trees





TIGER IN THE TREES
by
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)

“Myra! Come inside! It’s going to rain, and you’ll catch a cold if you stay out!”

Myra sighed. She didn’t mind being outside in the rain. It was exciting, but her mom, Dr. Liz Wikem, was a stickler about health. Myra and her parents were on a mission trip in Indonesia.

Myra started toward the mission house where her family was staying. It was a nice house, made of bamboo, with a steeply sloped roof.

She went into the kitchen to wash her hands; her mother hated it when her hands were dirty. Mom was standing over the woodstove stirring something in a pot; she glanced over at Myra and then turned around and looked at her feet.

“Myra, where are your shoes?”

She slowly looked down at her feet and found that she did not have any shoes on. “I was wading in the brook, and I forgot to grab them when you called me in.”

Mom looked out the window. “Go get them quickly; it’s not raining yet.”

Myra shot out the door, and ran over to the brook where she had left her shoes. Sure enough, they were right where she had left them, but as she reached down to grab them, she heard rustling in the jungle just beyond the brook.

Myra looked up and saw something she had only hoped to see in a zoo or on television. There was tiger just inside the trees, watching her every move and getting dangerously close.

Myra’s feet couldn’t move as she watched the tiger getting closer and closer. She also knew it would be a bad idea to move suddenly, because a tiger was way faster than she was. It would be able to overtake her in a matter of seconds.

She slowly started moving away from the tiger toward the house. She heard a shout.

“Myra! Don’t move! I’m coming.”

She stopped moving and waited. She then heard the sound of a tranquilizer gun going off, and the tiger fell to the ground in a deep sleep.

Her dad came up behind her, “Myra, are you alright, Sweetie?”

Myra slowly nodded her head.

“Go inside and find your mother. I’m going to wait here for the Indonesian Animal Control people.”

She started running back to the house, when she heard her father call her back.“Myra!” She saw him holding her sandals. “Do you want these?”

“I’m coming, Dad!” She ran to him, snatched her sandals out of his hand and grabbed him in a hug. “Thank you, Daddy.”

“Your welcome, Myra. Go inside now and see your mother. She was pretty hysterical when she saw the tiger creeping towards you.”

“Yes, Dad.”

With that, Myra took off towards the house, and ran into her mother’s waiting arms, which for a couple of minutes, she thought she would never do again. And they cried for joy that Myra was safe and unharmed.


The End

(Assignment for Lesson #12 - Climax)


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Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Birthday Surprise




Birthday Surpise
by
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)


BEEP, BEEP, BEEP, BEE…

I slammed my hand down on the snooze button, Ah, peace.

“Hannah! It’s time to get up!”

Ugh. Out of all five children why did I have to be the one that’s not a morning person? I kicked back the sheets and sat up. Why does today feel different? Then I remembered,

“Today I’m fifteen.”

“Wow, really?” I looked up; it was Jason my almost-eighteen-year-old, brother. “Can you say that one more time, Hannah? I’m not sure I can believe it until you say it again.”  The sarcasm in his voice made me mad.

“Go!” I pointed to the barn. “Don’t you need to do chores?”

“Done and done.” He smiled. “Why don’t you go take care of your presents?” With that he sauntered off to his room.

What on earth could he mean? I leapt out of bed and pulled on my good jeans and the nicest t-shirt I could find.

“Happy birthday, Hannah,” Mom said as I thundered down the stairs. “Come and eat some pancakes. They’re chocolate chip.”

I licked my lips. Chocolate chip pancakes were my favorite! I sat down at the island, and Mom set a plate of pancakes down in front of me.

I looked over at her. “Mom? Jason said I should go take care of my presents. What did he mean?”

She smiled. “Wait until Dad and your brother and sisters come in. Then you’ll find out.”

“Alright, keep your secrets. I’m going to eat these delicious looking pancakes before they get cold!”

“You do that.” We laughed.

By the time I had finished eating, the rest of my family had come in and cleaned up from barn chores. We all went into the living room, and I opened presents.

I got a $25 gift card for I-tunes from Sierra, my twelve-year-old sister, and a new bike helmet from Jason. My youngest siblings, Catherine and Conner, nine-year-old twins, got me a 6” horse model of an Arabian rearing.

The presents from Mom and Dad were a dog leash and collar in my favorite colors, aqua and lime green. I looked up at them, and they laughed at my perplexed face. 

“The rest of the present is from Aunt Trisha. Why don’t you call her and find out what it is?”

I jumped up and ran to the phone, but not before I had thanked everyone for the gifts. I hurriedly dialed Aunt Trisha’s number.

Ring… Ring… Ring… “Hello?”

“Hi, Aunt Trisha.”

“Well, hello, Hannah. I suppose you’re calling to find out what I’m giving you for your birthday.”

“Yep. What is it??”

“Well, Anchor just had puppies, and I thou…”

“I GET TO PICK OUT A PUPPY???”

“Hold your horses, Hannah! Yes, you get to pick out one of the puppies.”

“Thank you, thank you, thank you! When can I come choose?”

“Right now, if it’s alright with your mother.”

“Mom, can I bike over to Aunt Trisha’s house and choose one of the pups?”

“Yes, you can.”

”Mom said I could. I’ll be over in less than five minutes!”

“See you then, bye.”

”Bye!” I hung up the phone and rushed upstairs to grab my sweatshirt. “Bye Mom! I’ll be back in a little bit!”

I shoved the collar and leash in my bag and ran outside. Three minutes later I pulled into Aunt Trisha’s driveway and parked my bike by the house. The puppy barn was about ten yards from the house, and I ran as fast as I could to get there, assuming she would be there.

“Slow down, Hannah!” Aunt Trisha laughed as I burst through the open door.

“Sorry, I’m really excited!” I walked over to the pen where the puppies and their mother were eating. “It’s going to be so hard to choose!”

“Go ahead and sit with them in the pen. Wait for them to come to you.”

“OK.” I entered and sat down. Right away, Anchor, the mama, came over and sat next to me. I stroked her head and waited, after about five minutes the puppies started to notice me. One of them bounded over and pounced on my foot. I laughed.

“You’re a silly little one, aren’t you?”

“That one is Clownfish. He is a little bit of a clown.”

Another one of the puppies came and sprawled out on my leg.

“His name is Octopus.”

“Good one. You’re a cutie, Mr. Octopus.” The other five pups waddled or bounded over to me, except one, an image of her mother, just walked quietly over to me sat down and placed her paw on my leg. Right away I knew she was the one.

*****

“Harbor, what are you doing over there? It’s all muddy, and I just gave you a bath!” It had been a week since I had gotten her, and she was learning commands well. I ran over to see what she was looking at. Right there was a Himalayan kitten, all covered in mud and looking just about dead.

I scooped up the scrawny kitten and ran to the house.

“MOM!” I hurried into the kitchen; Mom turned around and saw the kitten.

“Bring it over here, Hannah.” She grabbed a towel out of the drawer and placed it on the counter, “Wipe it off, and I’ll see if I can find a basket. You can get some of the goat’s milk out of the fridge. Make sure it’s fresh.”

I walked over to the counter and wiped the kitten off. It was a girl. I fed her some milk, all the while thinking about a name. Then after a few minutes, I remembered that I had always wanted a cat named Magenta.

“What do you think little kitty? How’s Magenta for a name?” As I held her up and looked into her eyes, she purred. So from then on everyone called her Magenta, and she and Harbor became the best of friends.


The End


(Assignment for Lesson #5 - Setting)

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Tuesday, April 5, 2016

Shadow




Shadow
by
Evie McKenzie
(age 15)

Once upon a time there was a wild mustang, named Shadow for her unusual, but beautiful pigment, a dark gray with black points at her legs, and ablack mane and tail. She loved to gallop through fields and prance up and
down the stream that rushed down from the mountain. She was a proud horse and often very bossy to the other mares.

When she was about two years old, still a filly learning the ways of the world, several rabid wolves attacked her mother, and she died. Now hermother, or dam in the horse world, was the lead mare of the herd. So naturally, this young filly thought she would be instructed to take over her mother’s position as lead mare. However, things don’t work that way in a herd. The second in command would take the lead mare position and choose a new second in command. In this case the mare whose name was Blossom - a good natured red roan mare of six years, chose Shadow the young filly, so she could be trained into the leader Blossom knew she could be.

But things would not go as planned. As the years progressed, Shadow kept getting pushed down deeper in the chain until she reached the bottom.

This saddened Blossom very much, for she knew there was greatness in store for the foal of her closest friend. So she started giving lessons to Shadow, and eventually she began to progress in not being as bossy and sassy as she used to be. Then slowly, but steadily, she worked her way back up to second in command, and eventually Blossom gave up her position to Shadow, who became lead mare, with Blossom as second once again.

At the same time Shadow was learning her manners from Blossom, there was a crippled old man who attended the farm animal auction in town every month. He had a good-sized barn that he wanted to use for a horse, for company and to strengthen his crippled legs.

Every month he was disappointed with what he saw, but still he kept going, hobbling around the auction barns looking at the horses and trying to get a feel for what he wanted. He didn’t really know what he was looking for,
but he had a feeling he would know when he saw it.

On this particular day, some of the wranglers from one of the big ranches on the edge of town had roped some mustangs. The old man was looking around the barn, and then he heard a friendly greeting. He turned around
and saw the most beautiful horse he had ever seen! It was dark gray with black points, and a black mane and tail, which stood about fifteen hands high.

Right away he knew this was the one he had to have. But there was a down side to this; it was one of the wild mustangs. How in the world would he tame it, let alone ride? But for some odd reason, he thought he would be
able to handle it. He would buy it, see if he could tame it, and if he couldn’t, he’d find a way to let the beautiful mustang back into freedom.

                                                                  *****

Oh, I feel so terribly alone! I was not used to being cooped up in a stall. I was bored, I started cribbing.After a few minutes of chewing on the stall door, I heard footsteps down at the other end of the barn. I looked up and saw an old man looking at one of the horses across the aisle.

I nickered a friendly greeting, and the man turned around. He saw me and looked thoroughly at me. I bobbed my head as if to say, “Come and scratch me!”

He laughed at my little gesture. He hobbled over to my door, and reached around my head to scratch my neck. I closed my eyes and let out a contented sigh.

”Well, you certainly are friendly. Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Earl Hilton. I come to the auction every month in search of a beautiful, friendly horse like yourself.”

I was flattered; I had never received any human praise or compliments before. It felt wonderful to be called beautiful and friendly.

“Now I wonder what your name is.” He looked at the clipboard that hung on the outside of her stall that told her name, height, age, gender, and coloring. He scanned the paper, but there was no name.

Earl laughed, “Well, I guess they couldn’t think up a good enough name for you, huh?” He thought for a moment, “I guess if I’m going to buy you, I might as well think up a name for you. Any suggestions?”

I panicked. A new name? I liked my name just fine, thank you. I quickly tried to think of a way to tell Earl what my name was. It just so happened that the light was coming in the barn just right, and it cast a shadow of Earl. I nudged him to get his attention, and then bobbed my head towards the shadow.

“Yeah, it’s a shadow. Haven’t you ever seen a shadow before? Just kidding, I know you’ve seen shadows…” He stopped talking and stared at me with awe.“You’re a wonder to behold, girl. Are you telling me your name is Shadow?”

I nodded my head dramatically, and then raised my lip in a horse “laugh” that can mean “du-uh.” Earl threw his head back and laughed, “That’s a right good name for beautiful animal like you!”

“Excuse me, sir,” said someone rather sharply. “I need to get this mare out to the ring.” I looked behind Earl, and he turned around. Neither of us noticed that a man had walked up.

“Her name is Shadow, Frank.” His reply was almost as curt as Frank’s statement.

“Shadow? Did you come up with that silly name?” He laughed.

“No, she told me.”

“She told you?” He burst out laughing.

Earl turned his back on the man and whispered in my ear, “I’ll see you in the ring, and then you’re coming home with me.” Then he walked off.

Once Frank had finished his laughing he grabbed a lead rope and clipped it onto my halter and led me out to the auction ring.
                                                                  *****

“Next we have a beautiful, five year old wild mustang. She’s as pretty as they come.”

Frank led me into the ring, and I started prancing in place. He jerked on the rope, which just made me more nervous, and I started rearing.

“A little high strung, ain’t she? All right, who’ll start the bidding at $1,000?”

Earl raised his hand.

“$1,500?”

A young woman in a cowboy hat raised her hand. The bidding went on up to $5,000, until it was just Earl and the young lady.

“$5,500?” The auctioneer looked at Earl, and he nodded.

“$6,000” He turned to the young lady, she shook her head. “Anyone? Anyone? Going once, going twice, SOLD! To the man in the back! Come claim your prize.”

Earl got up and hobbled to the front of the crowd. Entering the ring, he walked slowly toward me. Once I saw him, I settled down. Frank handed over the lead rope and leaned in to Earl and whispered, “You’re a fool to take
on this wild animal, Earl!”

“I’ll manage.” With that, he paid the auctioneer, took me over to his truck and trailer, and loaded me up.

*****
Earl eventually was able to ride Shadow for a short time, and it strengthened his legs a lot. So much actually, that he was able to walk with just a little limp. After owning her for six years, he noticed that Shadow looked sad. Her ears lopped out to the sides and she didn’t have as much of her usual spunk. So one day, he took a truck ride down to the fancy ranch that had taken Shadow from her herd and asked where they had found her. He drove back feeling sad, but lighthearted at what he must do.

Shadow was never more grateful in her life! Earl had found her herd and brought her back to it. She still took a weekly trip with her herd to his house to visit, and soon he had made friends with even the shyest of the horses. A year later she came back with a young colt at her side to give to her old friend, to be his companion to the end of his days.

                                                                The End






(Assignment for Lesson #3 - Adjectives)




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